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government must control the amount of violence in the films to control crimes in the society.Do you agree or dis agree

#government #control #amount #violence #films #crimes #society #dis
A crime involves a lot of
violence
 and
the
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society is affected by the crime.
Now-a-days
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 we come across
such
 situations where a lot of
crimes
 are done based on the idea present in a movie.Some of these
crimes
 are terrorizing.To what extent the amount of
violence
 in
films
 affects the
crimes
 in the society is discussed in
this
 essay and the necessary actions to be taken by the government. Every person in
this
 modern world is fond of
films
.Going to the theatres,watching cinemas or watching them
in
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home
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 by sitting very comfortably on
sofa
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 has become a daily habit for almost all
people
.We can say that
people
 are addicted to them. Most of the cinemas,web series,dramas today have
the
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scenes that
involves
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 brutal
crimes
 like murders,kidnapping,stalking and drug usage.
People
 watch the movies despite
this
.One in every thousand
people
 is motivated by the filthy acts involved in the
film
.A small disclaimer at the beginning of the
film
 stating that
this
film
 does not involve
real world
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 instances is not going to bring any
differnce
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difference
 to that one person. We observe most
people
 imitating the attitude,dressing and talking style from the actors of the
film
 in our daily life.We consider
this
 as a normal act.
Ofcourse
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Of course
 it is,
however
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 there are some
people
 who
imitates
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the
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vulgar scenes in
the
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films
 or
the
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violent
films
.These vulgar shots are
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subconsciously
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sub consciously
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subconsciously
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 fed into a
persons
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 brain.A person may
try
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 recreate them ,
there by
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thereby
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 ,making him
to
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commit a crime. Children are very sensitive.Watching
such
films
 from
the
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childhood may disturb their brains and damage their future.Parents need to make sure that kids
dont
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don't
 watch
such
 movies.
Hence
 keeping all these
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effects
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affects
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effects
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 into consideration government must reduce the amount of
violence
 in the
films
.That will bring at least change a few
people
 from committing
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a misdemeanour
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misdemeanour
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. To conclude ,not only the government but the actors and the directors involving in the
film making
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 must cut down the proportion of the
violence
 to the possible extent.
Also
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People
 should not encourage
such
films
 by watching them.
People
 must more be connected to peace.
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