It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the opinion?What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

Normally, an appropriate method of learning can help young kids differentiate between what is right and what is wrong. Some experts suggest that

punishment

is an effective technique that can he them to achieve the goal. Personally, I agree with

this

viewpoint for several reasons.

First

of all,

punishment

can help youngsters

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of what they did wrong.

For example

when young

children

steal someone's belongings without any

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, their parents or teachers need to teach them by punishing in order to prevent

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from developing

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inappropriate

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.

In other words

, being punished can make youngsters immediately know what the wrong thing is.

Secondly

, young

children

who can distinguish between right and wrong can live a simple and happy life in

this

society.

For instance

, young kids learn not to run or make any loud noises while visiting

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in a hospital.They know how to behave well by not doing anything that will lead them to be punished.

Last

but not least,

punishment

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can make young kids be more

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.

Nevertheless

, being too harsh to young

children

will lead to terrible effects in the future especially in terms of

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and mental disorders. The youngsters who received violence

punishment

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to be more aggressive than those who received the appropriate one.

Therefore

, it is essential for parents and teachers to select the proper methods of

punishment

. It has to be more creative and useful than to be severe.

For example

, doing more community services is one of the appropriate

punishment

methods that should be selected because it is the opportunity not only for

children

to do something for other people but

also

for them to learn new things. In

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I completely agree with using

punishment

as a tool for

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learning.

However

, considering

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the proper

punishment

should be

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priority.

Therefore

, I would suggest parents and teachers

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select the appropriate types of

punishment

before using them with young

children

.