nowadays, people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What problems can lack of sleep cause? What can be done lack of sleep?
Being not able to take a rest is one of the major issues that humankind facing
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To begin
with, most people experiencing lack
of Correct article usage
a lack
nap
due to the demands of their works. There are some companies that they do not have Fix the agreement mistake
naps
flexible
schedule and they suddenly changing the time without prior notice. Add an article
a flexible
For instance
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of employees
this
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need to work overtime instantly especially if there is a quota. Correct pronoun usage
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As a result
, there
body clock is changing and if it Replace the word
their
is happened
in a Change to the active voice
happens
happened
longer
time it will lead you to hardly get adequate sleep.
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In addition
to this
, certain problems will developed
like insomnia; Change the verb form
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develop
inability
of a person to staying Add an article
the inability
sleep
at night. Correct your spelling
asleep
However
, this
will solved
by getting exercise regularly at least 30 minutes a day, avoid consuming too much caffeine or alcohol and try to do some bedtime rituals, Change the verb form
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solve
such
as taking a warm bath, reading some books and listening music
in order to relax your mind. Change preposition
to music
Thus
, certain tips will help you to have a good sleep at night.
To conclude this
, despite of
being busy in our lives we will never forget that health is wealth. Remove the preposition
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discussed the reasons and promote some ways of getting Change the verb form
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an
enough rest. Remove the article
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