nowadays, people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What problems can lack of sleep cause? What can be done lack of sleep?

Being not able to take a rest is one of the major issues that humankind facing
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possible causes along with
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in lacking
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sleep.
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of
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due to the demands of their works. There are some companies that they do not have
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schedule and they suddenly changing the time without prior notice.
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working in Qatar’s factory complaint and experienced
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need to work overtime instantly especially if there is a quota.
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body clock is changing and if it
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in a
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time it will lead you to hardly get adequate sleep.
In addition
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like insomnia;
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of a person to staying
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at night.
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,
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by getting exercise regularly at least 30 minutes a day, avoid consuming too much caffeine or alcohol and try to do some bedtime rituals,
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as taking a warm bath, reading some books and listening
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in order to relax your mind.
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, certain tips will help you to have a good sleep at night. To conclude
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being busy in our lives we will never forget that health is wealth.
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discussed the reasons and promote some ways of getting
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enough rest.
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it was clearly seen that having
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trouble in sleep it has a huge
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our activities of daily living.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Insomnia
  • Sleep deprivation
  • Sleep disorders
  • Sleep quality
  • Fatigue
  • Exhaustion
  • Restless
  • Restorative sleep
  • REM sleep
  • Circadian rhythm
  • Sleep hygiene
  • Napping
  • Sleep duration
  • Melatonin
  • Sleep-inducing
  • Drowsiness
  • Sleep disturbances
  • Obstructive sleep apnea
  • Snoring
  • Sleepwalking
  • Sleep talking
  • Shift work
  • Sleeping pills
  • Sleep aid
  • Relaxation techniques
  • Meditation
  • Deep breathing
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