Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extend do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

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It is undeniable that most of the countries are facing
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congestion and air
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issues all over the world,
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, raising the prices of petrol has been a considerable
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to solve those growing
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.
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high pricing of petrol is a good
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to control the
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, I think that the government should tax for
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,especially for private’s
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. On the one hand, despite it is a good
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to solve to control the growing
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and
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of
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by raising the costs of fuel, it will affect all types of transportations including public transports
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as buses.
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, some
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may need to commute every day in order to go to their works or some students need to use school buses to go to school. IF the price of gas is high, those
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who use public transport may need to pay higher fees for using that.
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,
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may reduce the traffics and
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issues, whereas, it can be affected on some
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who use public transportation.
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, I think that taxing the
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particularly in private’s
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by the governments might be effective in controlling
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on the rods and reducing air
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. With the advance of technology,
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easily brought so many
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with affordable prices and
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, there are so many private
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which are more than the number of families in households. It happened mostly all family members are using their privates’
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and it leads to so many
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on roads and
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jams. For instance, in Singapore, the taxes on
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are very expensive and everyone is unable to own private
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because of the high taxing by the Singapore government.
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the most public is using trains and public transportation to commute. To sum up, though I agree that it is the best method to solve the
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of growing
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and
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by increasing the petrol price, I believe that raising the tax for private
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might be effective to solve the
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like the government in Singapore did taxing to control
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congestion.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Discourage
  • Incentivize
  • Alternative energy
  • Public transportation
  • Lower-income
  • Carpool
  • Ride-sharing
  • Congestion
  • Urban planning
  • Pedestrian-friendly
  • Tax incentives
  • Electric and hybrid vehicles
  • Emissions standards
  • Cleaner vehicles
  • Congestion charges
  • Bicycle lanes
  • Sustainable
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