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In many countries schools have severe problems with student behavior. What do you think are the causes of this?What solutions can you suggest?

#countries #schools #student #behavior
In
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the changes in the
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toddlers
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First
 and foremost point , the parents are very indulged in their earnings . To illustrate ,
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, the guardians are busy in doing their jobs because they think that by earning more and more money they will be able to brighten their
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Moreover
 , an increase in the use of
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 they want to spend their whole day with the device and learn many wrong things by using social media like by watching
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 and so on , they forget that how to behave with elders and in the society . There are some solutions to
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this
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 their ward .
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 duty to earn
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their
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 of time with him .
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 the mobiles of their children . In spite they do not totally ban the use of social media , games and so on , they have to fix
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enough time for it and encourage their offspring in outdoor games and activities . In conclusion ,
however
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • parental guidance
  • discipline
  • moral guidance
  • social media
  • detrimental
  • bullying
  • peer pressure
  • overcrowded
  • disengagement
  • disruptive behavior
  • behavioral policies
  • code of conduct
  • parental involvement
  • social and emotional learning (SEL)
  • empathy
  • responsible decisions
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