under British and Australian laws a jury is a criminal case has no access to information about the defendant's past criminal record. This protects the person who is being accused of the crime some lawyers have suggested that this practice should be changed and that a jury should be given all the past facts before they reach their decision about the case do you agree or disagree ? Give reason for your answer
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It is debatable whether or not the communities still tend to judge people by connecting their past characters easily.
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the defendant’s past criminal information. Change preposition
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While
some people may think that the
past records may provide additional details, others believe that it is highly harmful Correct article usage
apply
for
the accused person. Personally speaking, I may not agree Change the preposition
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the
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with the
afore- mentioned
statement as I tend to believe that old activities have no right to be involved in today’s cases. Despite the fact that people can change and grow after what they have been through, apparentlyCorrect your spelling
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, it is wiser by any chance to weight
only the present facts and Correct your spelling
weigh
evidences
as the former facts have already been passed. By way of illustration Change the wording
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a Unnecessary verb
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jury
may have accused the wrong person just because one has a bad criminal report. Thus
, to me
it is only fair to Add a comma
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excluded
the earlier reports. Change the form of the verb
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On the other hand
, another opinion to consider is that repeated bad behaviors
should be punished harder than the first one. Change the spelling
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Consequently
, in this
case, jury
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me
it is better to not implicate Add a comma
me,
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belief. Like the previous statement, I am deeply concerned that a decision may not be valid if the jury
had the previous files. To conclude
, what British and Australian laws have done to hide the former facts sound
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for
me. An accountable judgement can be made if only the Change preposition
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jury
excluded past defendants
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