The majority of news being reported bad news such as wars, famines, accidents and crime. Why do you think that is? Do you think news should be a balance of both good and bad news?

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The role of newspapers and

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channels is to report the

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of the world in an unadulterated fashion.

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, many people feel that most of the

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being reported is negative and bad. In

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essay, we shall see what the purpose of

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is. On one hand, it is important to be objective when reporting the

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because it allows the viewers to make their own realizations. But one thing that needs to be understood here is that they are not reporting on fictional events,

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, they are broadcasting on actual live events, and even though it may be depressing to continuously hear bad

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, it is

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important to know about it.

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, when I was young and living in Dubai, during the Gulf War we always used to complain about how everyone constantly talks about it. Only later we understood, that the reason people discussed it a lot was that geographically we were in the same region as Kuwait, and

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was the worry about how it would affect the United Arab Emirates. Alternately, not all the

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reported in the newspapers is bad. There are sections dedicated to reporting on the good acts performed by strangers all over the world.

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, sections of the newspaper are dedicated to cartoons, puzzles, and features on how to improve health. In conclusion,

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the majority of the

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being reported is bad, we need to understand that

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is the world we are living in, and we need to be aware of what is happening around us because we never know a situation in one country may affect us.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

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4 paragraphs

277 words

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The majority of news being reported bad news such as wars, famines, accidents and crime. Why do you think that is? Do you think news should be a balance of both good and bad news?

Your opinion

One group of people prefer to live in houses that have fewer tall buildings, while others prefer the opposite. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

7.Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others think that actions can be taken to bring the change. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.