A large number of advertisements nowadays are targeted at children . Many people say this has negative effects on children and should therefore be banned . To what extent do you agree or disagree .
At present ,
children
are persuaded by advertisers. Many people
are worried about this
matter and they say advertising should be banned . In my opinion , we can't ban advertising . I shall put forth my argument to support my view in the following paragraph .
Admittedly , children
are being targeted by advertiser's because they can easily sell their products
to children
, they use different sorts of colours and amazing things so that children
buy their products
. Sometimes children
put pressure on their parents for buying products
but , all families are not able to purchase these products
for children
also
it upset their family budget . For instance
, one month ago I recognize my neighbour child was carrying for purchasing a
electronic toy car but it was so hard for them and Change the article
an
finally
, they had to land for buying the car . Unhealthy foods should not be marketed especially fast food and which is detrimental for children
also
should be displayed warnings .
On the other hand
, we can't ban advertising because it serves us from many aspects . Advertisements inform us about the choices we have if advertising would not publish we would have less choice . A large number of people
are working in the advertising industry if we ban advertising the unemployment problem Will increase , also
people
like to watch advertising because advertisement industry uses celebrities for publicity . People
can be informed about many diseases like Sakib Al Hasan advertise for polo Pals which is Important for newborn baby .
To sum up , some illegal advertising should be regulated or even banned which is harmful to children
and by displaying warnings we can save our children
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite