some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised and in correct place. What is your opinion about this?

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it is required to organize the surrounding, while others do not pay attention to how everything is managed. From my perspective, it's important to clean and organise your place, because it has an impact on your productivity.
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, if an individual has a lot of tasks, he will complete
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job until the deadline only if nothing can disturb him. If there are a lot of things on the table,
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tend to lose their attention.
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, a clean workplace gives the opportunity to make
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high-quality work on time. It is apparent that organised
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are more likely to be successful,
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during nowadays competitive world, it is the fateful decision of each individual to reach the goal or not by the self-discipline.
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, millionaires always pay attention
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schedule, workplace, home and other pieces of their lives, because they cannot think with
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mind until everything will be not
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, they think a lot about everything and their mind is similar to a big dump. Will these
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be successful? To conclude, clean and organised space has a significant impact on one group of
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think that it is not a vital necessity. As far as I am concerned that
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organizational point is on the equal level of essential needs for humanity.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • organised
  • clutter-free
  • productivity
  • mental clarity
  • efficiency
  • professionalism
  • first impressions
  • ergonomics
  • aesthetically pleasing
  • compulsive neatness
  • functional space
  • minimising distractions
  • systematic arrangement
  • time management
  • work-life balance
  • streamline
  • feng shui
  • optimal performance
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