As countries develop, more and more people buy and use their cars. Do you think the advantages of this trend for individuals outweigh its disadvantage for environment?

It has been

growing

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trend to

general

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public frequently use cars

instead

of public transport. While

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there is no doubt

this

facility improve the condition of life as well as less

time consuming

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. On the other side, it

also

have

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a negative impact on

environment

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. In

this

forthcoming passage, I will explain some benefits and drawbacks of using four-wheels.

To begin

with, in the economically stable countries folks are now

owing

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own

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car, it indicates that

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the standard of living is improved. It is giving more freedom, people can go anywhere with no time and

also

granting mobility and independence to travel. Now, a person can go

for

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shopping or

and

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kind of work with he/ her flexible schedule.

In addition

, travelling by car makes journey enjoyable and vibrant as well as

cost efficient

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and

with in

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low time.

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,

few

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weeks ago one of my

friend

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went

for

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family

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trip, he mentioned that

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it took only 5 hours to reach compare to public transports.

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, they stay

long

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and

also

enjoyed their vacation fruitfully without getting

tried

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.

However

,

on the other hand

, we cannot deny that

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truth traffic congestion

are

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rising due to use of cars.

Top

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of that, those vehicles are running by petrol, diesel which emission toxin gas. For that reason, the quality of air and climate

were

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damaging

with

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alarming

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rate.

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, the world environment research centre reported that

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the

uses

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of personal cars is higher which

are

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is are

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reason

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the reason

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of

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environment

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environmental

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pollution. To conclude, the advantages of personal transport are many rather than its disadvantages. We just need to

carefully

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how can we less damage our planet.