You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter: explain what you like bout the cafeteria say what is wrong suggest how it could be improved

Dear Mr Mathew, I am writing
this
letter to you to bring your attention to the menu and quality of food in your cafeteria, Bruch Time. I am Isha, a student of B.Art.
Firstly
, I want to mention that the ambience in the cafeteria is very good and I really liked the french architect theme.
Secondly
, the seating arrangement is very comfortable.
Finally
, the location is worth mentioning as it is very easy to reach there.
However
, there are some issues with the menu and quality of food. Most of the food is awesome but the
dishes
involved with the fish items are pathetic; they look stale and taste very bad.
In addition
, the number of non-vegetarian
dishes
on the card is very limited.
Therefore
, I feel that some more
dishes
for non-vegetarians should be added to the menu
such
as chicken tikka and chicken kebabs.
Moreover
, please check with the chef what's wrong with the fish
dishes
. Hoping to hear from you soon Yours sincerely, Isha
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