You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter: explain what you like bout the cafeteria say what is wrong suggest how it could be improved

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Dear Mr Mathew, I am writing

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letter to you to bring your attention to the menu and quality of food in your cafeteria, Bruch Time. I am Isha, a student of B.Art.

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, I want to mention that the ambience in the cafeteria is very good and I really liked the french architect theme.

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, the seating arrangement is very comfortable.

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, the location is worth mentioning as it is very easy to reach there.

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, there are some issues with the menu and quality of food. Most of the food is awesome but the

dishes

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involved with the fish items are pathetic; they look stale and taste very bad.

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, the number of non-vegetarian

dishes

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on the card is very limited.

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, I feel that some more

dishes

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for non-vegetarians should be added to the menu

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as chicken tikka and chicken kebabs.

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, please check with the chef what's wrong with the fish

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. Hoping to hear from you soon Yours sincerely, Isha

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