Nowadays, the media focuses on problems and emergencies rather than positive developments. Some people think it is harmful to individuals and to society. To what extent do you agree?

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Today, problems and emergencies are given more focus rather than positive development by the

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. In general, some people think that

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approach may be harmful to society and individuals. In my ,opinion I totally agree with the statement. In

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I give my opinion about why the

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is being harmful to individuals and society.

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and foremost, the

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are companies that need to make a profit.

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, they understood a long time ago that good

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does not sell. If I plug into the

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right now it is clear that what will appear are death and destruction, because

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how they get the attention of their audience. There is an urban slang that says bad

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run fast, and it is not different from the

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, another thing that comes along with problems and emergencies are politicians. Today, the

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works in favour of those politics that work in accordance with their agenda and go against those politicians that do not.

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, if we check there are feel

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channels that are focused on positive development or something relative.

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, those

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channels that highlight positive developments do not have only

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kind of business. Actually, they may not be one hundred per cent in the new business. A good example is a Brazilian channel called "Tv Cultura"

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which as the name says was totally focused on positively foster their

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, only focusing on the positive

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, as everyone knows, everything

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good does not

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long. Tv Cultura nowadays is now aligned with the politician in which part of their

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is to attack those who are not aligned with their agenda.

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but not least,

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kind of

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approach is more than clear

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harmful to society.

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, Brazil is

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example of corruption and bad political management and the

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is helping them to stay in power since they are earning their honourable.

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, as water is liquid and a stone is solid the

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will not change their natural approach. Having a more positive and good sight toward the

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. As it said in

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text, good

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does not sell.

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