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Libraries are obsolete these days. so universities should follow digital media. What is your opinion? Discuss advantages and disadvantages?

#libraries #universities #media
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Should universities
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 of
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? Nowadays many people say that Universities should close their
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 and start to
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 because of the easy access to any kind of information through computers.
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, many students can get access to the museum information, not just to look for sculpture or paints but to do virtual tours, you can visit important museums located in important cities
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 as Paris, New York or London.
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. Can you imaging if the students can get the intellectual material of the
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 Novel Prices that was published just
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 week?
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 will be totally better than wait for a long time period to get the books on the shelf of the library.
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, some of the disadvantages to not benefit
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 is that new generations of students will be lost the opportunity to enjoy reading with the book on hand, and they would not get access to original editions of the books,
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 means, the old ones books can not be loaded to the big computers because their will prefer to load just the new ones. Another problem that Universities will face with digital
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 is the big amounts of money to do the investment in computers and terminals. If each university wants to close their own
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 will expend too much money to get the same data of information on a server or Big Computer than the current library.
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, if the educational institution wants to
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 of
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, my recommendation is to
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, yes get the money need it, but,
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 investment must
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 it into the
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. Both should live together and
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 will be more proactive than close
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