As communication technology develops people are interacting with each other in different ways does this train have more advantages or disadvantages

Nowadays,

technology

is the most important thing to

people

for many reasons, and it will be useful to interact with each other.

This

essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of communication software.

Such

as

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Facebook,

wahtsapp

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WhatsApp

Whatsapp

and zoom. I believe that

technology

has more advantages than drawbacks. At the outset,

Technology

also

has some major disadvantages like

that is

affecting

on

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relationship

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relationships

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badly and waste many viable times. Social media, websites gaming and other program chatting are

effect

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for

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by

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human

behavior

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behaviour

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,

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because it is less the

interact

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interaction

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with other

people

physically.

For instance

, when children

interactive

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interact

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with

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the teacher

a teacher

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teacher

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teachers

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and other students in school it

is improve

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improves

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their mental health and that improve their physical body. What’s more, Online software can create

more

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a more

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serious situation where

cyber bullying

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cyberbullying

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are

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involved. The

precent

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per cent

present

of

a

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exposure to

the

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enmity

are increase

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the

last

of time.

For example

, many youngsters are getting the negative aspect from website.

However

, the

internet

companies and the families can play a good role model in that point to spread awareness between

people

which will enhance their knowledge,

also

can use the

internet

safer. The two main advantages of the newer communication software are easily communicated with other

people

in many different countries and a large number of

a

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new job opening remotely for many

people

.

Firstly

, humans

in

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a

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nowadays can follow

news

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the news

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for their families and friends more easily.

In addition

, the

internet

converts all world to be

small

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a small

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village and

that

is be

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more beneficial to improve the connect to other

people

easily and keep in touch with friends.

Secondly

,

Technology

increases the level of employment by bringing new jobs.

For instance

, after

coronavirus

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many companies work remotely the

results

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result

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for that the manager hiring staff and employees from other countries for

this

position. To conclude,

Internet

technology

has certain

disadvantage

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like less the communication physically between

people

and many crimes occur on websites. I believe that these benefits of

technology

important and useful compare

than

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drawbacks.