Allowing young children to do an enjoyable activity can develop better skills and more creativity than reading. To what extent do you agree? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer.

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stay in the playful atmosphere to develop their imagination rather than reading a stack of books. While many parents

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with letting children

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stay in

joyful

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environment

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strengthen

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their mental and physical abilities, others

disgree

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disagree

since it was waste of time and nothing can guarantee that doing

this

going to suit

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their kid.

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essay agrees with the former and provides possible reasons to support

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point of view. A fundamental reason for

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is that the nature of

children

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mostly pleasant when they spent their time with

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things challenging, fun, and with a lot of

people

as well as friends. It is generally accepted that driving by happiness can bring all the success come closer since doing something boring as reading was

inchallenge

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challenge

and easily to fatigue. To be more explicit,

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subject

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such

as science: it was massively better for

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the learner

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learner

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to experiment with the real substances that can

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and effortless to start a hypothesis.

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mentioned sort can be related with improving creativity ability of

younster

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youngster

youngsters

that enjoyed

practicle

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practical

practice

moment made them

to

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learn to

asking

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; what, where, when, and why.

Furthermore

, while some

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do

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not want to take a risk by sacrificing their precious time to spent with nonsense things as doing something really fun but gaining just creative

skill

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so they expected academic knowledge, there were still tremendously of

people

who did not agree with the latter since they thought it might be more stressed for the young kids that be

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force

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to read without knowing any reason of why they need to read and if the book they read was reliable, sensible, and accurate or not.

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, the one who

learning

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from positivity job was boarding in

knowledges

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knowledge

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, experiences, and talents even though

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number of

people

thought these were unproductive if compared with

concentrate

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on reading but what they received were tripled. In conclusion, studying with happiness, challenge, and experience

were

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more important than just focusing on academic knowledge which sometimes did not clarify an answer specific enough so that experimentation and

practicing

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were important and highly helped

rasing

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the

confident

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and

creativity

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abilities.