Many people believe that the high levels of violence in films today are causing serious social problems.  What are these problems and how could they be reduced?

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Nowadays there are people which

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that films with a lot of violence are causing serious social issues.

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caused by unstable mental

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, which could be solved by registration on sites for watching films and parents' control. For young people, like kids, any seen scene effect more real and emotional than for adults. It

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isn't ready for that. Any seen information create a view of the world. If there

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plenty of cruel and violent scenes,

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the kid

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kid

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would accept that like truth. And it will negatively affect in future by developing as a person cause of fears. So, to prevent

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future,

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parent

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should solve that. Most

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to decrease

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time of looking around of child, they leave him with a smartphone and a film on. A curious kid could easily switch on

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, which is not almost for him.

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unresponsive actions destroy mental

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. In other ways, younger can open

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and easily watch any violent film. There are restrict watching by age,

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is no limit

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because there

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no acts like registration . It does

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increase

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of views.

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it doesn't cost

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of kids. In conclusion,

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issue of watching

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could be solved by careful looking around

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Task Achievement: 6.5

Complete response

6.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

230 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

desensitization
empathy
aggressive behaviors
imitation
antisocial behavior
normalization
climate of fear
perceptions
mental health
aggression
emotional regulation
trauma-related symptoms
age ratings
critical viewing skills
nonviolent entertainment
film industry
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