Many people believe that the high levels of violence in films today are causing serious social problems.  What are these problems and how could they be reduced?

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that films with a lot of violence are causing serious social issues.

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caused by unstable mental

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, which could be solved by registration on sites for watching films and parents' control. For young people, like kids, any seen scene effect more real and emotional than for adults. It

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plenty of cruel and violent scenes,

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would accept that like truth. And it will negatively affect in future by developing as a person cause of fears. So, to prevent

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time of looking around of child, they leave him with a smartphone and a film on. A curious kid could easily switch on

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unresponsive actions destroy mental

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and easily watch any violent film. There are restrict watching by age,

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is no limit

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no acts like registration . It does

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of views.

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could be solved by careful looking around

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desensitization
empathy
aggressive behaviors
imitation
antisocial behavior
normalization
climate of fear
perceptions
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emotional regulation
trauma-related symptoms
age ratings
critical viewing skills
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