People in your area are having problems with their internet connection. Write a letter to the company which provides the connection. In your letter, describe the problems explain how it is affecting people say what the company should do to help Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear sir/madam, I am writing
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letter to express my dissatisfaction with the current
internet
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connection of your company as most of the time the
internet
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speed is too low that I can’t download important documents.
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, all of my office meetings are done by the webcam so fast speed connectivity is mandatory. Let me explain the situation to you as all my office work is done by fast speed
internet
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so lack of good connectivity would hinder my work.
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,all the biometrics system regarding attendance of employees is
also
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connected to an
internet
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connection so I am not able to manage attendance and timings so it has created indiscipline in my office. I think so that there is a problem with your broadband as it’s always blinking red light and I want that your company should replace the broadband with some other connectivity device.
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, I want that all wiring related to
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connection should
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be replaced . Awaiting speedy service from your company soon. Yours faithfully, Jagjit
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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