Many people these days have computer, laptop, and telephone at their home for work. Do you think working from home has more advantage or disadvantage?

Nowadays, the availability of gadgets at
home
for
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the job
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job
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is more popular. Because of
this
, staying at your place while doing your work is more convenient, and it
save
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time as well as money for transportation.
This
essay will discuss the pros than the cons of working at
home
.
To begin
with, most of the employer’s claimed that
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who are staying at their dwelling place while doing their work are giving them more fruitful than working in the regular offices. The logic of
this
, others
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able to concentrate and being distracted because of the noisy environment.
In addition
, others can save time for commuting and money for gas or public transportation.
For instance
, according to the 2020 survey from
Manila
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times journal 20% of the employees are more productive rather than in
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workplace.
Therefore
, many people now are shifting their jobs which are more
favorable
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at
home
.
In addition
, working tasks at
home
are having
a negative impacts
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to
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their jobs its because some workers are might abusing their schedule and tend to forget that some
paperworks
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paperwork
are needed to be done on time.
For example
, their working on a project and it will be submitted
nextweek
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next week
but they forgot to prioritize it because of some other things to do.
As a result
, they will give a huge crisis to the company. To conclude, the technology in
this
era assist us in a variety of ways even though your working at
home
.
This
essay has discussed the strength of doing duties at work than the weakness.
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