You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter - correct the information in the article - explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information - suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing the letter to you in terms of misunderstanding about my hometown which has been mentioning in your monthly magazine. The reason why is that the clause that you have presented about Butterfly Lake which is a trademark of my native city, is just a name since 19 century and it has been nothing related to any historical data. For being one of the leading international travel magazines, the editor must care all the information before printing it out to the public,

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all the data should check with the local people to gather all possible sources

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of relying on one source.

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, for us as a viewer, we only rely on the facts, if we would like to travel around the country and even travelling abroad by holding these facts. I hope you understand my suggestion and explanation for future publishing matters. Thanks for getting the chance to write something true about our childhood memorable place. Yours faithfully, Honey Linn