Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example, through cell phone tracking and security cameras). In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Opinions are divided as to whether the advancement of technology used for monitoring purposes is more beneficial than drawbacks. Despite the fact that there are some disadvantages. I believe that it brings about much more benefits. There are some reasons why I firmly think that it is more advantageous.

Firstly

, a variety of technological devices can be used for surveillance, especially many useful security cameras which have been utilized to detect thefts and robbers.

For instance

, The Amazon company has been using

this

technological appliance to monitor everyone's actions, It not only creates a sense of safety for the customers but

also

being able to manage their stocks and sales effectively.

Secondly

, throughout the world, the authorities provide mobile

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for various police

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since it can help policemen to trace offenders easily and make society more peaceful.

However

, it does not mean that there is no negative effect on humanity. It is undeniable that advanced technology is becoming an influence and

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our privacy away from the way it used to be.

Due to

the development of digital appliances

such

as some application trackings which can be used to hank other people's addresses, just knowing

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or Password of others.

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, lots of households have brought

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security cameras

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to their children's bedrooms to monitor them,

although

parents can help their kids in

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emergency time when they are in need, many teenagers

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privacy

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could lead to

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aggressively

due to

being too much intimidated unconsciously. In conclusion, I can understand why

this

technology could be negative for people, but it seems to me that its benefits far outweigh the drawbacks.