Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

Balance is the key to an explicit and standard living.Everyone is free to choose whatsoever he or she desires to eat but balance is key.What makes someone healthy is ensuring the proper
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in take
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of balanced meals at
appropriate
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time
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and in the right proportion. The level of protein
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human acquires from eating
meat
and
fish
is worthy of
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note.Even if one is a vegan there are ways you can take other
proteinious
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proteinous
foods and it would not harm you.It is important you take a good no of healthy protein meals.
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, if you are not eating
fish
or
meat
, you should be taking enough
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e.t.c else your body system would not work properly. On the one hand, they say too much of everything is not good,so even for those
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of people who take
fish
and
meat
,it should be in minimal quantity except for kids. Healthwise they say
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important we take more
fish
than
meat
.That one totally shuts out these proteins is not a good idea for me.
On the other hand
,people who believe eating
fish
or
meat
is a way of punishing
livestocks
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livestock
by killing them might not be totally right. In fact,folks who
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lis little or no intake of
fish
or
meat
mostly have omega3 deficiency. For health
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, you might choose not to take
high
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level
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of these foods and do more
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vegetables and healthy liquids like water,but totally shut them out is a no-no for me. In conclusion,
meat
or
fish
is part of foods that provide humans with adequate
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so should be taken in right amount when prepared rightly.Hippocrates said let thy food be thy medicine, when you eat well,diseases will be far from you.
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