Some people believe that technology has made man more social. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

The use of

technology

is becoming increasingly popular in the world. There is a debate between

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, some of them believe that

one

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of

technology

arehelping

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are helping

men

to be more social. I completely disagree with

this

statement. In the following paragraphs, I will discuss why I think

technology

leads people to be less social.

To begin

with,

technology

has a lot of benefits, but

one

of the most side effects is leading

men

to be less social. machinery

such

as iPod, iPhone and laptops decrease the

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interaction between

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the crowd

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, so

instead

of gathering and talking, they will use different applications to chat or send a message.

For example

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the nation

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nation

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used to meet at clubs watching the match together and having dinner, but ,

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they stare at the phones for hours.

In addition

, online applications, In the past public used to negotiate,

for instance

,in Saudi Arabia

men

used to wake up on Friday went to Green House market, so the customers and sellers negotiate about the products.

However

, after the spread of

technology

, society using the internet to buy, and don't care like before. To summarise, machinery is

one

of the most useful inventions, while

one

of its negative effects is

men

are not very sociable.