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Some people say that schools should concentrate on teaching students academic subjects that will be useful for their future careers. Other say that subjects such as music and sports are also necessary. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays, there are a lot of arguments about whether schools should focus Only on scientific
subjects
, or they must
also
 contain other
subjects
 like sport and art. in my opinion, the schools must have extracurricular activities, and I will illustrate why. No one can deny the important role the educations play in preparing students for their professional career. The main object of the study institutions is to give their attendees knowledge and skills. leading them to be able to interact with society and have better job opportunities.
as a result
, they will help themselves as well as making a good positive impact on the community. is must
also
 be said that a lot of jobs need a high level of skills and knowledge and a long time of reading, meaning that they will need all of their time to be targeted to their reading.
On the other hand
, it must be said that the future career for a considerable amount of students might be singing or acting.
This
 means that we can not assume
this
 or that student  is not going to benefit from
this
 subject. As well as we need doctors and mathematicians we
also
 need singers and players,
hence
 we can not just push all of our pupils to focus on one sector.
Furthermore
, skills and activities
such
 as painting and gaming broaden the adolescent's horizon and give them space to relax from the heaviness of other
subjects
. In conclusion, all types of
subjects
 have it is important and effectivity in shaping the future of our children. And we must not eliminate any type of them.
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