In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

People
argue that the advantages of digital
books
or
newspapers
will lead to the disappearance of the traditional ones. I strongly agree with
this
opinion. The primary reason why nobody will purchase
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printed
books
and
newspapers
is due to their negative effects on
environment
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. Conventional
books
and
newspapers
are made from wood, and
hence
a plethora of trees
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to be cut to provide materials for
paper
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manufacturing process.
This
could exacerbate
the
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deforestation which is a headache issue
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all countries around the globe. To address
this
critical problem, many
goverments
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governments
have imposed higher taxes on wood-made products, and
books
or
newspapers
are one of the bypass products of
woods
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.
As a result
, the price of
books
and
newspapers
shoots up and forces
people
think
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about another economic way to replace printed
books
and
newspapers
. On the other
hands
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, there is a variety of advantages of electronic
books
and
newspapers
.
Firstly
, they do not need to be printed out on the papers so that they are very friendly to
environment
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, and the manufacturing and printing of
books
and
newspapers
are significantly reduced.
Therefore
, their price is much cheaper than the printed
books
and
newspapers
, and
people
can afford to buy them.
Secondly
,
people
can easily update news or information anytime and anywhere as long as they have a smartphone connecting to wifi.
This
is an extraordinary benefit for busy
people
who has a limit of time per day.
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, the high quality and vivid image
helps
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the digital
books
and
newspapers
outweigh the conventional ones. In my conclusion, the purchase of printed
newspapers
or
books
will be decreasingly dropped and
people
will prefer to buy digital ones due to their obvious advantages.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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