Some people think if students are afraid of teacher it is better. Others say that having a friendly relationship is better. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

The teachers and the
students
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relationships are the most significant aspect of
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the
school
period, everyone should feel
this
when they are studying.
However
, some believe that the teachers should be
stricted
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restricted
strict
to their
students
, it is better for
both
while others think that a good
teacher
is having a friendly contact with
students
. In
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, I strongly agree with the former opinion for the following reasons.
To begin
with, these days the professors and
pupil
can create the good relationship between them namely friendly manner,
as a result
, the
pupil
will be
focued
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focused
more on their studies.
In other words
, if a lecture having
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friendly contact with their class kids, the
school
kids would be asked more doubt about the subject in order to they will be gotten more scores. Taking western countries,
for example
, these countries lectures have been attaching very close to their
pupil
, even the
students
can make a call after finishing
school
when they will have any doubt about the subject,
consequently
, these
students
can get more wisdom than any other nations. Obviously,
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best
teacher
might be maintained a good relationship with their's
pupil
.
On the other hand
, the
trainer
should be strict
to
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their
students
because
this
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afraids
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afraid
can lead to focuses on studies. Sometimes over freedom can destroy to their's future career,
hence
, a
trainer
should be more strict to
pupil
. Taking India,
for instance
,
this
country
trainer
never
be
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a friendly manner to their
pupil
,
thus
, they can give more attention on studies and scores as well as will be increased more knowledge.
Hence
, the
trainer
never will be
friendly
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way to
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pupil
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. To conclude, the professors and
school
kids
both
are spending most of the time with together in long years. Some say every professor should
be strictly treat
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to
students
, others think
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teacher
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is having a better relationship with
students
. In my opinion, about
this
,
teacher
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is
a
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another friend of every student,
this
trend gives a lot of benefits to
both
sides
such
as professor
recieves
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receives
respect from
pupil
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, student
get
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more knowledge from
professor
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