Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?
Petrol
is an important mineral for transportation
vehicles. Increasing traffic in cities causing more pollution
nowadays, and some suggest that adding more tax on petrol
will solve this
problem. In my opinion, I am totally against this
solution, I will discuss why it is, and what are the ways to improve effective transportation
.
Every common man needs transportation
to commute for work and other basic daily needs, by increasing the price of petrol
alone won't
solve everyone's problem. For instance
, a person is travelling longer every day for this
work and it happens to be in a remote area, where you won't
find public transport
or more vehicle travelling frequently. In this
case, he has to depend on his own vehicle transportation
and he has to buy petrol
for his vehicle on his own money. By increasing the petrol
price won't
solve his problem it only gives him more depression, eventually
he has to look for other ways of Add a comma
,eventually
transport
or change his job to any closer location, which is hard in real life so this
solution won't
solve many people's problems.
Transportation
has many forms,it varies from roads, rails, water and air travel, the government has to find out which causes less pollution
to implement in their city. For example
, if a government finds out if more people use public transportation
pollution
can be reduced gradually, then
the city public transport
should be improved and made available at all times. People will also
prefer the timing of busses to be in perfect intervals, so that they may reach their destination in time. This
will encourage them to travel in public transport
and problems regarding pollution
can be gradually decreased.
In conclusion, increasing the petrol
price alone won't
solve the traffic and pollution
problems, other infrastructure developments are also
needed to be improved to fight against pollution
. Each city has some way to counter pollution
and traffic, those ideas should be identified and implemented in developing cities.Submitted by suruthi25 on
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