Some people think that a huge amount of time and money is spent on protection of wild animals, and that this money could be better spent on the human population. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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have been taking steps to restore wildlife. They are not hesitating to spend a huge amount of money on it. Whereas other believe that, if that money will use in the welfare of the society
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there could be a better outcome. I do not agree with the latter view, as
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have the same right of survival as a human.
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with, every living being is a part of a
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chain, which is a fundamental system of life and in the absence of any living being from the
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it could be an outcome disastrous for each of us. To illustrate it, the honey bee is a tiny insect, but not only it plays a vital role to balance the
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chain, but it is
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equally important for pollination. If there are no bees
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there is no fruits and vegetables.
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,
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are connected to our meal whether directly or indirectly. Dairy products, vegetables, meat and various other
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items are dependent on several
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. To maintain ecological balance we must protect them.
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,
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are suffering the adverse effect of climate change due to human actions. Global warming is a quite famous term nowadays, as it has been turning into a gigantic issue for all organisms. Beyond the disruption of
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habitats, global warming
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shifts the cyclical events in the lives of
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. It is heart-wrenching to see
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in circumstances where they are about to extinct.
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, as we can see the massive influx in population, we are destroying forests to settle down our people. No doubt that
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forest is a home of numerous species, if a human is responsible for
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, one ought to provide them shelter too. In the conclusion, I wholeheartedly support the restoration of
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as they are
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a part of
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world, they are equally important for our survival.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • ecosystem stability
  • pollination
  • water purification
  • climate regulation
  • eco-tourism
  • scientific research
  • moral and ethical responsibility
  • deforestation
  • pollution
  • financial cost
  • social issues
  • healthcare
  • education
  • fund allocation
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