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Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing. do you agree or disagree?

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The pie chart shows the career paths of
graduates
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 with Anthropology degrees, and the table shows the
salaries
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 of anthropologists after five years of
employment
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. Overall, most of the
graduates
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 found full-time
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 and the highest proportion of the top-earning anthropologists worked for the government. The pie-chart illustrates that a little over half of the
graduates
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 were in full-time
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, followed at quite a distance, by part-time
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 at 15% and unemployment at 12%. Those in postgraduate studies or unknown occupations accounted for 8%, respectively. The fewest, at only 5%, each, were those doing both part-time work and postgraduate study. The table reveals that
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 working in private businesses had the lowest
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 as almost half were earning
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 from $25-74,999, 25% received $75-99,999, and only 30% were being paid over $100,000. Both freelancers and government employees had 5% earning $25,000-49,999, 15% making $50,-74,999 and
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 the other 80% on
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 of $75,000 to over $100,000.
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