In the contemporary era, western films popularities are rising speedily in many countries around the globe, it is often argued that
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motion pictures have some negative development on
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nation traditions and norms. While, others believe that, it
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positive progress on society. In, the forthcoming essay, I will explain both
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statement is that, watching other countries pictures like, English movies, have educational value, which
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people to improves their listing, reading and writing skills.
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a survey on migrated students about learning languages, they found 90%
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claim that
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they learn it from movies.
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information about other states
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land , they cannot face any cultural shock.
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are so lively and vibrant which can grab
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of their viewers compare to local films
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dull and dry , there
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no artificial effects.
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money and
there is no scope to showing own traditions information of the world.
To conclude, in my opinion,
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we cannot deny
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drawbacks. It is
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from foreign people learn so many things.