many manufactured food and drink products contain high level off sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Many

people

argue that

food

products

which

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contain

high

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level

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of sugar should be taxed to lessen buying by

people

, since it may lead to serious health issues. From

professional

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view,

this

will not be much effective in declining the purchase of those

items

. Governments have to take long term remedies to counter

this

problem.

First

of all, authorities should run awareness programmes on social media platforms to attract

people

attention to the harmful effects of sugary products on citizens' health. Because

food

that

contain

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high levels of sugar can result in multiple health problems

such

as diabetes and hypertension.

Secondly

, taxation on similar

items

will not result in the desired effects of lessening sweety

food

consumption.

People

would rather sacrifice

on

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luxurious

items

to satisfy their addiction. The

best known

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European

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countries impose a toll on tobacco.

Inspite

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In spite

of

this

legislation, individuals continue buying

cigarette

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at the expense of other

items

.

Moreover

, parents should be

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role models in guiding their children to the right way by discouraging them from purchasing harmful

food

. On top of that, politicians have to enact holistic programmes in the educational curriculum of schools.

For instance

, in

Japan

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the schools turn

this

issue into practice by offering healthy meals for their students. In

this

way, we engender sensible generations who will be aware of the impacts of eating sugary products. In conclusion, governments ought to institute initiatives aimed at various demographics to motivate them towards healthy

food

.

Similarly

, parents have been recognised as role models for their children by instilling moral values and

awaring

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awarding

them towards the risks of consuming unhealthy

items

and serving them healthy

food

.