In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is undeniable that most
people
are focusing on online
platforms
than other
platforms
such
as television, radio, or
newspapers
.
This
is the reason why printed
newspapers
or
books
will be disrupted in the future due to most
people
will read them online for free. From my point of view, I agree with
this
idea for many reasons, described in the following paragraphs.
To begin
with, I personally believe that
newspapers
and
books
will be replaced and disrupted by the online platform for many reasons.
Firstly
, most
people
always use a mobile phone in daily life and spend time on online
platforms
such
as Twitter, Facebook, Instagram, and Web board when they have leisure time that they can access
platforms
for reading
news
or content easily than buying
newspapers
or
books
at a store.
Secondly
, the reader can read
news
or
books
online for free without additional payment for content published on the online
platforms
.
This
reason will affect readers feeling that they will not pay more money to buy
newspapers
or
books
for reading but they can read it on their mobile phone or tablet.
Finally
, teenagers will not pay attention to a newspaper or
books
due to they think that it is an old-fashioned trend which is not appropriate for their lifestyle. In my opinion, most teenagers think that why they have to spend time buying
newspapers
or
books
while they can read it in an application on a mobile phone that
news
or content is immediately updated by some
people
who stay in the real situation which they can share and discuss with their friends immediately without waiting a press published some
news
.
Moreover
, they can access a book that comes from
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in an easy way. In conclusion, I personally agree with
this
idea that a newspaper or
books
will be replaced and disrupted by a free online platform and most
people
will be more take interested in the online
platforms
in the future.
Also
, it will give many advantages and the society will grow up based on developed technology.
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