In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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It is undeniable that most
people
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are focusing on online
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than other
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as television, radio, or
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is the reason why printed
newspapers
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or
books
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will be disrupted in the future due to most
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will read them online for free. From my point of view, I agree with
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idea for many reasons, described in the following paragraphs.
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with, I personally believe that
newspapers
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and
books
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will be replaced and disrupted by the online platform for many reasons.
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, most
people
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always use a mobile phone in daily life and spend time on online
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such
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as Twitter, Facebook, Instagram, and Web board when they have leisure time that they can access
platforms
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for reading
news
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or content easily than buying
newspapers
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or
books
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at a store.
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, the reader can read
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or
books
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online for free without additional payment for content published on the online
platforms
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.
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reason will affect readers feeling that they will not pay more money to buy
newspapers
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or
books
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for reading but they can read it on their mobile phone or tablet.
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, teenagers will not pay attention to a newspaper or
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due to they think that it is an old-fashioned trend which is not appropriate for their lifestyle. In my opinion, most teenagers think that why they have to spend time buying
newspapers
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or
books
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while they can read it in an application on a mobile phone that
news
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or content is immediately updated by some
people
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who stay in the real situation which they can share and discuss with their friends immediately without waiting a press published some
news
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.
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, they can access a book that comes from
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in an easy way. In conclusion, I personally agree with
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idea that a newspaper or
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will be replaced and disrupted by a free online platform and most
people
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will be more take interested in the online
platforms
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in the future.
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, it will give many advantages and the society will grow up based on developed technology.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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