With growing populations in cities, more and more people live in homes with little or no outdoor space. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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There is no doubt these days we see the huge growth of residents in different countries,
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, we see them living in tiny
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which has small outdoor
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or even no
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discuss
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. At some point certain of people when they decide to
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a house or even rent one they always looking for one with an outdoor
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so they can do their
activites
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activities
.
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play ground
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for the
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families
with children, there is a number of parents can not go outside with their kids to a park or somewhere else.
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, having an
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out door
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outdoor
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area
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would be fun when you gathering with family and friends. An example, doing
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barbeque
on weekends.
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, it is not always a good idea to have an opening
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.
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, nowadays buying or renting houses cost
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a lot
of money, to be more
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clarify
clearly
even a small apartment could be as expensive as
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homes
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. Many
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people
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turn
to a residence no outdoor
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to save money,
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,
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without opening areas
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really can help for saving
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energy,
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, there is no need to clean up the backyard or the garden after
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stormy and windy weather,
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it may destroy the whole
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decoration. It is dangerous for the kids under age five years they may
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out by them selfs and got lost. In conclusion, it seems there is a sperate
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of getting an opening
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,
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, doing
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research for
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and apartment it may help for the right
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decision
, something works with the money they have and the family
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situation
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