With growing populations in cities, more and more people live in homes with little or no outdoor space. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

There is no doubt these days we see the huge growth of residents in different countries,

moreover

, we see them living in tiny

homes

space

which has small outdoor

space

or even no

space

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will

disscuse

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discuss

the

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benefits

and the backwards of

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statement

. At some point certain of people when they decide to

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a house or even rent one they always looking for one with an outdoor

space

so they can do their

activites

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activities

.

For example

, a

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playground

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play ground

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playground

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for the

familis

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families

with children, there is a number of parents can not go outside with their kids to a park or somewhere else.

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, having an

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outdoor

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out door

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outdoor

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area

it

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would be fun when you gathering with family and friends. An example, doing

barbque

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barbeque

on weekends.

However

, it is not always a good idea to have an opening

area

.

On the other hand

, nowadays buying or renting houses cost

alot

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a lot

of money, to be more

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clarify

clearly

even a small apartment could be as expensive as

homes

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. Many

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people

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turn

to a residence no outdoor

area

to save money,

In addition

,

homes

without opening areas

it

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really can help for saving

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energy,

for example

, there is no need to clean up the backyard or the garden after

a

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stormy and windy weather,

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it may destroy the whole

area

decoration. It is dangerous for the kids under age five years they may

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out by them selfs and got lost. In conclusion, it seems there is a sperate

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of getting an opening

area

,

however

, doing

a

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research for

homes

and apartment it may help for the right

desicon

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decision

, something works with the money they have and the family

sitoution

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situation

.