You have been doing some voluntary work to help your local community. However, now you are unable to continue doing this work. Write a letter to the manager of the organisation where you have been working. In your letter describe the work you have been doing explain why you can no longer do this work recommend another person who is interested in the work

#work #community #manager #organisation #person

Dear Patrick, Hope

this

letter finds you well and safe. It was lovely seeing you

last

Thursday. I am writing you

this

letter because, as I mentioned, I am no longer available to volunteer for "Together we can" and I wanted to make it official. I am extremely grateful for my participation in so many great projects.

However

, I am about to start working full-time for a new non-profit organisation back home. While I obviously feel extremely anxious to leave, I am confident that through

this

new job I will be able to help even more communities in need. As you know, my country is full of injustice and I strongly feel that

this

opportunity will allow me to make an impact in the world. Over the

last

few years volunteering and helping others, I discovered my passion. Serving food to the homeless of our neighbourhood, finding them improved housing options and educating them to find a job, has been a dream come true and, I have to thank you for that. Numerous times, I have been thinking about a possible candidate to cover my place, and I now believe I found the right person: my dearest friend John. He is immensely hardworking, constantly looking to assist others and willing to go the extra mile to do it. I have already talked to him and he will be contacting you shortly. I sincerely think that he will be a great fit. Hope you understand my decision and that one day, in the new future, we can work together again. I am looking forward to seeing you soon Best, Sonia M.

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9 paragraphs

270 words

5.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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