Despite much investment in public
still prefer to possess their own vehicles, especially
, when they commute to work or on holidays.
might seems to provide them more convenience,
, there are
many problems accompanying the usage of
. Some of the problems will be discussed below together with suggestions for alternatives.
, car usage has reportedly caused a huge amount of exhaust and
, negatively affect the environment and quality of life. As a matter of fact, environmentalists have been raising much concern over the use of fuel for personal
, which has released
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amount of carbon dioxide into the air.
As a result
, the recent quality of air in crowded cities has almost always
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the alert level.
leads to detrimental repercussions on residentials' health and
on the habitat.
, the increased figure in car sales and usage
goes along with the rising number of car accidents due to unconscious driving or rushing behaviours.
, one of the prominent reasons for
among other types of
is the ability to choose when and how fast to drive to their destinations. At some points when they are in a hurry to work, they would probably choose
of running to the
station and spare some more minutes waiting with the risk of
delay. In that case, they will more likely use their own
and speed up, risking crashing their vehicles with others'. In other situations,
so it is more suitable to drive home late after a party as trains have
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, they might possibly not be in
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unconscious state of mind when driving, leading to high chances of accidents.
For the reasons above, I personally believe public
is preferable for the safety of everyone on the streets. So as to make it more convenient, governments and
stations managers can consider increasing the number of trains and schedule.
weekend trains might be till 1am so party
or those who are on late-night shifts will be able to take. Another suggestion would be researching and expanding
routes so it reaches more areas and customers. More public transports users will
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of emissions on
might be very convenient at times, excessive reliance on
type of transports brings about many problems for the environment and for the safety of drivers. Investment
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would be a possible solution to help ease