Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is an often argued issue that the high
school
students should be worked in
a
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volunteer
work
to society, some say that
this
is a mandatory part of high
school
programmes.
However
, in
this
essay, I strongly agree with
this
statement for the two reasons
such
as gain real-world
experience
and help to
future
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career.
To begin
with, an unpaid task gives a real-world
experience
to students when they are studying in a high
school
.
In other words
, when a pupil goes to
work
in a charity for free of cost while he will be learned a lot of information beyond their's comfort zone, they can get a real
experience
through an unpaid task.
For example
, if a high
school
student works in
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areas, she would be known about their's lifestyle and how they suffer to earn and attain basic needs,
consequently
, she might be changed to herself when after finishing free of
work
because she knew actual life is what. Obviously,
this
idea should be a
mantadory
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mandatory

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part of high
school
curriculams
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curriculum

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.
Secondly
,
this
volunteer task can be gotten a
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job with
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salary. What I mean by
this
, many corporate companies are expected not only the
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candidates
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academic performance but
also
the social
work
certficate
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certificate

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too and the employer will evaluate to applicant's helping mind. For
instances
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, if you want a job of any
service based
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companies, they would be expected of
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a volunteer

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experience
certificate.
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, high
school
programmes must have
an
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apply

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unpaid
working
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for
a
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free performance of learners. To conclude,
this
essay argued that the learners will
be get
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more benefits from
an unpaid activities
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to communities when they study in high schools. in my opinion, about
this
, I strongly agree with
this
statement in the above-mentioned details
such
as gaining real-world
experience
and getting a good job in future.
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