Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is an often argued issue that the high
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students should be worked in
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volunteer
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to society, some say that
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is a mandatory part of high
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programmes.
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, in
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statement for the two reasons
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as gain real-world
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and help to
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career.
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with, an unpaid task gives a real-world
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to students when they are studying in a high
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.
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, when a pupil goes to
work
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in a charity for free of cost while he will be learned a lot of information beyond their's comfort zone, they can get a real
experience
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through an unpaid task.
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, if a high
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student works in
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underprivileged
areas, she would be known about their's lifestyle and how they suffer to earn and attain basic needs,
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, she might be changed to herself when after finishing free of
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because she knew actual life is what. Obviously,
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idea should be a
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mandatory
part of high
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curriculams
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curriculums
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.
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,
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volunteer task can be gotten a
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better
job with
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salary. What I mean by
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, many corporate companies are expected not only the
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candidates
candidate's
academic performance but
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the social
work
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certficate
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certificate
too and the employer will evaluate to applicant's helping mind. For
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, if you want a job of any
service based
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service-based
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companies, they would be expected of
volunteer
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a volunteer
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experience
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certificate.
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, high
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programmes must have
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unpaid
working
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for
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free performance of learners. To conclude,
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essay argued that the learners will
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more benefits from
an unpaid activities
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unpaid activities
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to communities when they study in high schools. in my opinion, about
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, I strongly agree with
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statement in the above-mentioned details
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as gaining real-world
experience
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and getting a good job in future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • compulsory
  • high school programmes
  • unpaid community service
  • charity
  • improving the neighbourhood
  • teaching sports
  • sense of responsibility
  • empathy
  • broader perspective
  • societal issues
  • college applications
  • job applications
  • positive impact
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