Some people believe that it is good to share as much as information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information id too important or to valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

According to some
people
,
knowledge
increases when it is shared especially scientific
research
and business
knowledge
should be shared, while others argue that it is better to keep some
knowledge
confidential. In
this
essay, both of these viewpoints will be discussed in detail before a conclusion is reached. There are
people
who argue that the benefits of sharing
knowledge
considerably outweigh its disadvantages. The main reason for believing
this
is that scientific advancement can be achieved faster and more when
people
do not need to have the financial background to acquire the necessary
knowledge
. It is
also
possible to say that there are many smart scientists who do not have the funds to acquire the important
knowledge
to complete their
research
. One good illustration of
this
is that a group of IT professionals can use
research
done by biomedical scientists to develop an app that could diagnose dangerous diseases. Even though
this
situation is beneficial, it is not true in all cases.
On the other hand
, others believe that some
knowledge
should be confidential as they consider it
as
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vital and much
knowledge
requires payment to produce and maintain. Some organizations have
this
opinion because they believe that they have invested resources to
research
in a specific direction and they should get the benefit of their investment. When they are not paid for
this
work, they can no longer generate science.
In addition
, certain types of
knowledge
on the wrong hand can be dangerous for society. Some of the
research
deal with a hazardous field
such
as nuclear physics.
For example
, terror occurred because some criminals were able to learn how to make explosives using free
knowledge
on the internet.
This
clearly, some
knowledge
should not be allowed to access by everyone. In conclusion. I believe that both arguments have their advantages and disadvantages.
However
, it seems to me that
although
distributing
knowledge
free of charge can help in certain aspects,
people
should be careful to underestimate the value and power of the
knowledge
.
Submitted by dr.phitsineevet4 on

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