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Some people don't have the natural ability to learn languages. Some schools should force students to learn foreign languages. Agree or Disagree?

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In
this
 contemporary world, there are huge advantages of knowing multiple foreign
languages
 so some schools make foreign
languages
 compulsory. Some
people
 believe that it is unnecessary to force students to learn
languages
 while others opine the opposite. In my perspective, I agree that children should be required to acquire other
languages
besides
 their mother tongue. On the one hand, some students do not have the natural linguistic ability. It will be uneasy and frustrating while learning a language that they are not familiar with.
As a result
, those children will face academic difficulties, which negatively affect their academic performance.
In addition
, some foreign
languages
 will probably turn out to be useless for some students in the future. There are many online translators to supports
people
 nowadays Turning to the bright side, acquiring a foreign language enables
people
 to communicate and adapt to many different environments.
For instance
, Ho Chi Minh, the former leader of the Vietnamese government, who was fluent in various
languages
 while travelling, could talk to
people
 from many countries. Another benefit is that linguistic skills can be an advantage in
people
’s future careers. Employers would recruit a worker of cultural diversity rather than a person who just knows his mother tongue. Some
people
 may argue that online translators could support them to get on with other foreigners but in my ,opinion those translators are unreliable. For all the aforementioned points, I believe that schools should consider foreign
languages
besides
 English compulsory. Foreign
languages
 help
people
 overcome language barriers, cultural differences and conflicts related to culture.
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