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Describe a movies is good? Are you agree or disagree

#movies
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I totally agree that movies are essential and useful for every
people
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. Pictures show the
real life
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 issues
on
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dramatic
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a dramatic
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 and emotional
way
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,
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 and study every feature
lovers
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 to reality.
This
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 essay will illustrate the meaning of films and
effect
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their effect
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 on
people
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. Nowadays, a majority of
people
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 are watching a
film
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, due to the fact it interests a person with unpredictable histories and increased in drama. Films developed in
meaning
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the meaning
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 of the story and give to
group
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a group
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 of
people
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 the feeling, which they did not felt previously.
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, by watching a
film
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 called “History of Benjamin Button”, I felt emotional fall and sadness. There is given a
well written
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 plot that the unique species want to live a life like others do in
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 novel.
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, I felt blues, when the main character died unhappy and
sorrowed
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. There are groups of
film
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 lovers
are
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 intensively increasing. It shows that good movies find their audience and become a leader in
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film
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the film
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 industry.
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, the fans of
the
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one of the greatest
show
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shows
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 ever, “Harry Potter” called themselves
as
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Potter
man's
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men
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. Usually, they provide their charities related to
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film
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the film
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. In July 2018 in Berlin was the ultimate parade, which includes
above
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 30000 Potter man.
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,
this
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 meeting will provide
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 year too. If I were free that day, I will have visited
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 charity. In conclusion, films are
good
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a good
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 and useful tool for everyone. They illustrate the problems in reality and help to overcome
such
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 sad situations given to us by life.
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