Describe a movies is good? Are you agree or disagree

I totally agree that movies are essential and useful for every
people
. Pictures show the
real life
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issues
on
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dramatic
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a dramatic

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and emotional
way
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,
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apply

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and study every feature
lovers
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to reality.
This
essay will illustrate the meaning of films and
effect
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on
people
. Nowadays, a majority of
people
are watching a
film
, due to the fact it interests a person with unpredictable histories and increased in drama. Films developed in
meaning
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the meaning

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of the story and give to
group
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a group

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of
people
the feeling, which they did not felt previously.
For instance
, by watching a
film
called “History of Benjamin Button”, I felt emotional fall and sadness. There is given a
well written
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plot that the unique species want to live a life like others do in
this
novel.
Consequently
, I felt blues, when the main character died unhappy and
sorrowed
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. There are groups of
film
lovers
are
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that are

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intensively increasing. It shows that good movies find their audience and become a leader in
film
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the film

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industry.
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, the fans of
the
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apply

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one of the greatest
show
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shows

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ever, “Harry Potter” called themselves
as
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Potter
man's
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men
man

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. Usually, they provide their charities related to
film
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. In July 2018 in Berlin was the ultimate parade, which includes
above
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the above

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30000 Potter man.
In addition
,
this
meeting will provide
this
year too. If I were free that day, I will have visited
this
charity. In conclusion, films are
good
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a good

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and useful tool for everyone. They illustrate the problems in reality and help to overcome
such
sad situations given to us by life.
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