You were hurt in a minor accident inside a supermarket, and you wish to complain to the supermarket. Write a letter to the manager of the supermarket. In your letter -say who you are -give details about the accident -suggest how the supermarket could prevent similar accidents

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Dear Sir or Madam My name is Keira Knightley and I live near your

supermarket

. I am a regular customer of your

supermarket

and I shop frequently there. I am writing

this

letter to complain about the accident that happened to me 2 days ago at your

supermarket

while

I was shopping. Regarding the accident, when I visited your

supermarket

2 days ago to buy pickles, an unfortunate accident occurred. I slipped on the wet surface

due to

the fact there was water on the floor and

then

I grabbed onto the shelf for support and accidentally caused a jar of pickles to fall and strike my head. I was in pain and I went to seek medical help. The medical report revealed that my ankle is broken and I will not be able to walk for the next three days.

Also

, I have a bump on my head.

Fortunately

Add a comma

Fortunately,

show examples

the bump on my head is not a serious injury.

Therefore

, I have a suggestion for your

supermarket

to prevent similar accidents in the future. You can put up warning signs to prevent customers from slipping and instruct your staff to clean the floor immediately if there is water on it. I hope that my experience can serve as a lesson for your

supermarket

to prioritize customer safety and comfort. Your attention to

this

matter is greatly appreciated. Yours faithfully Keira Knightley

Submitted by divatazkya2004 on Wed Dec 13 2023

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Coherence and Cohesion

Make sure that each paragraph presents a clear main idea and that ideas are not repeated or off-topic. Although the structure is generally logical, ensure that the transition between paragraphs is smooth for optimal coherence.

Task Achievement

Ensure that the task is fully addressed by including all necessary details requested in the prompt. You covered all points well, providing who you are, the accident's details, and suggestions for prevention.

Tone Consistency

Maintain a formal tone suitable for the context throughout the letter. Avoid overly casual language or contractions where possible, to uphold the formality expected in a letter to a manager.

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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

232 words

7.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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