In some areas of the US, a "curfew" is imposed, in which teenagers are not aallowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. what is your opinion about this.

In recent times, the US has imposed many curfews due to the uncertainty prevailing in the country. Various restrictions have been imposed on the citizens in different areas. Even, in some areas, teenagers are not allowed to go out of their homes after 9'o clock in the night. I think, considering the need for an hour, it is a wise decision to take. All these preventive measures taken by the government are analyzed and
hence
, are in context to protect the citizens of its own. Teenagers are a vulnerable part of society as they are too naïve to understand the motives of
this
crooked world.
Hence
, special protection has to be given to them in
such
unfavourable times.
Moreover
, ill-motive people, who are leading all the turbulence in the society, especially target them to the arm-strong government or common public. They can use them as a shield for their own good.
For instance
, In France, the Taliban has attacked college students multiple times and has managed to bend the government on their demands.
Nevertheless
, these curfews are not fully taking away the freedom of the young ones. In the guidelines, it has been clearly mentioned that they can step out of their homes while having some company. In fact, if accompanied by someone elder, they are
also
allowed to visit their friends during curfew timings.
This
can certainly help them to do their regular get-togethers and meanwhile, will
also
not impact their college homework and assignments. Even, young ones can go for their after-dinner walks with their parents which will certainly help them to release some heat from
this
intense situation. At the
last
, These restrictions might look harsh to few teenagers but they must understand that all these measures are taken for their safety and well being.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • enforce
  • juvenile
  • repercussions
  • autonomy
  • adolescence
  • paternalistic
  • delinquency
  • municipality
  • ordinance
  • authoritarian
  • peer pressure
  • social dynamics
  • civil liberties
  • community policing
  • preventative measures
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