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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Give reasons for your an

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Today
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 am going to discuss the pros and cons of the product's
advertisement
 whether it is beneficial or not and how it really affects people's life. According to
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view point
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viewpoint
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, 80% of people buy products just by the appearance of it in the
advertisement
.
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, whenever you see
youtube
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a youtube
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 video, it starts with the endorsement of either
food
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a food
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 channel or
clothing
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 app.
Advertisement
 sometimes changes our mind and we opt for checking that website and ended up buying things
which
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 are not even essential. Advertising trend nowadays is so booming and the way they represent their products, people generally
does
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 impulsive buying. On the
otherhand
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other hand
, the good thing about
advertisement
 is that it gives us information about the new products in the market.
For instance
, once
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 was watching some
podcast
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 and
meanwhile
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 some
add
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ads
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 pops up regarding
new
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the new
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 massage roller. It looks appealing and
i
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 saw that whole
addvertisement
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advertisement
 and after
that
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i
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 googled to see from where
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 can buy that roller. When
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 checked online
it's
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its
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 review the product was already out
since
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 two months but
i
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 got to know just when
i
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 came across that
advertisement
. I bought
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 it turned out to be
really
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 good face massage and
result
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 is really worth buying. I believe that, even though
advertisement
 has its own disadvantages, the best part is, without it, we will not come to know what new trend is going on or which new product has launched. All in all, if we abstain ourselves from buying needless thing,
advertisement
 is
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 best thing in our lives.
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