A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern word. Do you think that benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?

In many countries all around the world economic growth is dependent on their visitors .while some people argue that in lack of management tourism industry has a bad effect on the country.

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travelling to different countries have pros and cons .

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essay will attention both of view and in my opinion, I believed that the advantages of it outweigh the disadvantages. on the one hand, tourism plays a crucial role in the economical situation of each county. the fact factor to take into consideration is revenue.

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, Egypt annual attract many passengers to the country in order to visit the historical place that can lead to many job opportunity through building hotel, restaurant

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و as result of visitor living local people promote since they have

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chance to sell crops, handicraft to travellers.

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, while the number of

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goes up, the historical place will be faced many problems in the environment since authorities don't place

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attract

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of building hotels and accommodation for visitors.

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why local people

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of breathing taking view if scenery has to skyscraper. To sum up,

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, there is a highly recognizable relationship between the visitor industry and the improving income of the country. but if there was not good management for industry

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many attractive places will be destroyed. to me, the advantages of

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outweigh the disadvantages.