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Wealthy nations should assist poorer countries with humanitarian relief during natural disaster. Do you agree or disgaree?

#nations #countries #relief #disaster #disgaree
Its argued that humanitarian aid to help developing
country
 in time of natural disaster by the developed
country
. I agree, that wealthy nations have financial capabilities and can have a good relationship with poorer
countries
. Riches nations have financial
resources
 to aid the
countries
 in times of natural disaster. They have enough
resources
 like technology, doctors, food, clothes, and medicines to help out the
countries
 that have lacked it. 2014 the typhoon Yolanda hit Tacloban
Philippines
, the province was wash out by
this
 typhoon. There is no means of transportation and communication to connect to
this
 place but with the help of the USA airforce, they can send relief goods, medicines, and clothes to comfort them. The progressing
nation
 that continues to alleviate by the help of progressed
nation
 has developed stronghold. The
resources
 coming from the rich
country
 develop strong alliances or agreements in case the rich
country
 needs a
country
 to side and support them.
For example
, China and the
Philippines
, have a strong relationship to help them progress their
country
. China helping the
Philippines
 with the program called build build build.
This
 program helping the
Philippines
 to build interconnecting transportation to other provinces going to the capital city in a stressful free and less time for transport to the commuter. In return, China can do business in the
Philippines
 with good agreement. In conclusion, the
nation
 that has enough
resources
 to conquer the world should help hand the
nation
that is
 needed to develop in order both
countries
 have good communication with
this
 act
countries
 can have a well safe and peaceful nations.
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