In many countries today, crime novels and tv crimes dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and tv shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction tv crime dramas?
In recent years, people in many parts of the world are showing an increased inclination towards
crime
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genre of movies or novels promote
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harm
than good, especially to the youth.
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times justice is not delivered correctly due to lack of evidence or political influences of the criminals involved . People yearn for justice in these Correct article usage
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real life
situations, which they can find only in their favourite investigation series or fiction novels. Add a hyphen
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For instance
, most of the box office hits in Hollywood for 2020 were movies based on crime
theme, that shows the gaining polpularity
for these type of shows.
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popularity
On the other hand
, crime
dramas often depict personal vendattas
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For instance
,the American crime
thriller series 'The God father
' is depicts glorifying mafia and underworld crimes. Correct your spelling
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scene , following the ideas from a similar movie. Usually
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and elude the police without getting caught. These factors make this
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