These days people prefer to eat ready food outside of their home rather than home made food. Do you think this has more advantages and disadvantages

Today, many are inclined to consume ready food more,

instead

of

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home made

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edible materials.

Although

both of them have their benefits,

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essay argues that

this

kind of dietary habit is much more disadvantageous.

To begin

with, eating our meals outside of the home with ready foods provides people

a

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huge opportunity to taste

an

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international cuisine. By doing so,

for example

, one can experience

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Chinese

foods

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without visiting there. On the other side,

this

way is much

more easy

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when compared to cooking your own meals.

Preparig

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Preparing

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a dinner may take

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more than

hour

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,

however

, ordering

this

is not more than five minutes. In brief, one can

chose

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going

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out to eat,

instead

of staying

in

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the

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home, to taste foreign meals and profit from its easiness.

On the other hand

,

this

dietary habit may come with some drawbacks.

For instance

, most likely,

this

will create a huge economic burden for the individuals. Given the restaurants are considered in a place where luxury is commonplace, prices are becoming high in line with that reality. Potential risks are

also

another

aspects

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of

this

.

For instance

, many ready food producers do not take necessary precautions in terms of

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risks.

Moreover

, clients may be subjected to some diseases

as a result

of overlooking

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risky side. In short, financial results and provisional dangers are something that people need to pay attention

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To conclude, it is true that convenience foods have been popular compared to preparing them on

by

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own

last

times. While both of them have their points,

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detrimental effects outweigh

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benefits.