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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the work. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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It is undeniable that
languages
 have been died out every year and some
people
 accept that it is not vital as life will be more convenient in communications if there are a few
languages
 in the
world
. I strongly agree with
this
 statement as all
people
 can communicate easily and I will provide a logical conclusion in
this
 essay.
Firstly
,
people
 will get more chances to migrate and settle fast if there are lesser
languages
.
In other words
,
people
 don’t need to struggle their lives with linguistic problems.
For example
, if some
people
 want to migrate to other countries, they will not get pressure because of linguistic and cultural barriers.
Moreover
, they can easily understand the cultures of other countries and the characteristics of the local
people
.
Hence
, having few
languages
 give more changes to
people
.
Secondly
, language is a key to communication so most
people
 need to learn about
languages
 for interpreting or translation or to know about other country
languages
 like French, English, German, Japan. Some students need to learn two to three
languages
 since they were in primary schools to get more chances in later adult life.
For example
, if there will be only one language in the
world
then
 the
world
 will be like a village and everyone is viable get opportunities to communicate well in the
world
. To conclude,
although
 it is obvious that linguistics is decreasing every year, it carries many benefits to
people
life
Replace the word
living
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 to be easier and to get more chances.
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