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Smoking is a major cause of serious illness and death throughout the world today. In the interest of the public health, governments should ban cigarettes and other tobacco products. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Thanks to the observations done by the scientists, it is clear to everyone that cigarettes cause extremely serious problems to
people
's health.It is argued that governments are able to address
this
 issue by simply banning all tobacco products and I definitely support
this
 suggestion.
To begin
 with,it is obvious that smoking threatens
people
 health dramatically and not only the respiratory system but
also
 other parts of the body
such
 as the digestive system get affected by that.
Moreover
,because of the addictive attribute of smoking
people
 who smoke are used to it due to the nicotine they inhale by each cigarette they smoke .
Therefore
 getting rid of
this
 destructive habit is not easily possible for everyone.
Accordingly
, for a
,
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smoker there is always a temptation for smoking the
next
 cigar.
Although
 doctors and physicians discourage
people
 constantly from smoking ,it is not easy to avoid smoking unless when all the markets are clear from all those flashy and seductive cigarette boxes and
this
 is not achievable unless the governments make serious laws to ban importing,exporting and selling the tobacco products across the country. Advising and discouraging is no more practical what is needed to fix
this
 issue is implementation and action . In conclusion, I assume that it's the authorities' responsibility to consider the importance of the issue of smoking and not to sacrifice
people
's health for the taxes they earn from selling out cigarettes.
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