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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara Desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

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In recent years, many people tend to visit someplace that
are
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 not
familier
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familiar
 as a tourist destination and
also
 have a special climate.
Although
 the
turist
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tourist
tourism
 industry has plenty of benefits, it has some significant drawbacks that
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 the is more considerable because can have some
longterm
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 environmental impacts. On the one
hande
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hand
, vast
majory
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majority
 of adventure tourists have passionate to travel to some remote place that
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 still natural and it doesn’t alter by humans.
unfortunatly
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unfortunately
, there
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 very limited places on the
erth
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earth
 that aren’t changed the habitat by human beings. thereby, some tourists like
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 to the Sahara desert that fewer people go
ther
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there
 because of the hot
wather
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water
weather
 and the areas are unchanged with
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special wildlife.
On the other hand
, Over the past recent decades, myriads place have been damaged dramatically because of
tourism
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 industry.
For example
, a significant percentage of deforestation in eastern Asia special in
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some island
are
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happend
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happened
happen
 for building tourist accommodation and hotels
hence
 many animal
habitation
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 demolish and even many plant species extinct.
thus
, there is no exaggeration that travellers can have some hazardous and detrimental impact on some
habitat
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habitats
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 like
Antarctic
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the Antarctic
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 region and animals. To conclude, in terms of the environmental impacts, the demerits of visiting some remote place with a difficult
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claimed
 is more than the merits of doing it.
Although
this
 act would be
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extremely
challanging
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challenging
 for those who love to accept risk,
this
 type of
trips
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need
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 more consideration if will becoming common tourists destinations.
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