Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara Desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

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In recent years, many people tend to visit someplace that

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have a special climate.

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tourist

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industry has plenty of benefits, it has some significant drawbacks that

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the is more considerable because can have some

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environmental impacts. On the one

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, vast

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of adventure tourists have passionate to travel to some remote place that

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still natural and it doesn’t alter by humans.

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very limited places on the

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to the Sahara desert that fewer people go

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because of the hot

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weather

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special wildlife.

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, Over the past recent decades, myriads place have been damaged dramatically because of

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, a significant percentage of deforestation in eastern Asia special in

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some island

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for building tourist accommodation and hotels

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many animal

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demolish and even many plant species extinct.

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, there is no exaggeration that travellers can have some hazardous and detrimental impact on some

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Antarctic

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region and animals. To conclude, in terms of the environmental impacts, the demerits of visiting some remote place with a difficult

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is more than the merits of doing it.

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act would be

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more consideration if will becoming common tourists destinations.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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breathtaking landscapes
unique ecosystems
sense of adventure
personal growth
indigenous cultures
environmental conservation
climate change
environmental degradation
economically disadvantaged areas
physical health
harsh weather
difficult terrain
limited access to medical facilities
fragile ecosystems
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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara Desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

Fully explain your ideas

User Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how?

Schools are spending more time teaching traditional subjects such as history. Some people think they should rather spend more time in teaching skills that can help students find a job. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Children are facing more pressures nowadays from academic, social and commercial, perspectives. What are the causes of these pressures and what rneasures should be taken to reduce these pressures?

Some people think that certain old buildings are more worth preserving than other ones. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that good health is a basic human need, so the medical service should not be run by profit-making companies. Do you think the disadvantages of the private health care outweigh the advantages?