Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football. But others think taking part in individual sports is better, like swimming. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Sports are broadly classified into athletics and games, out of which games are usually

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and athletics are mainly individual

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. Whether a person’s interest is towards

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event or individual event is purely subjective,

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, some people

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argue

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games like football or cricket is more beneficial to take part in, compared to, individual

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like swimming or wrestling.

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, another group thinks that the latter is more beneficial than the former. Let us discuss deep into each of the

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before we arrive at a conclusion. Proponents of the

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argument

that

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is beneficial than

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put forward the following points to substantiate their

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argument

. Taking part in a

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can improve a person’s soft skills like empathy and teamwork,

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, improves his/her character.

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, in a

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like football, players often care for their teammates since

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important for the

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’s success.

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are advantages, sometimes players get dragged into

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politics which indeed stall their growth, and decreases their morale. To illustrate, take the example of Formula 1 which is one

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where teammates are the greatest rivals. People who believe

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is beneficial than

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lays down the following points.

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, individual

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provides a great sense of self-esteem,

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great satisfaction during success.

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, in

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like swimming, all the effort is put in by the individual which gives him/her full ownership of success.

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, high physical effort is often required for an individual

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, which motivates the player to be fit.

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with

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, individual sports requires

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amount of

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persistence

since there is no support from peers,

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there are chances that players might give up. In summary, whether

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or individual

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is more beneficial is a complicated topic for discussion. Both sides have their pros and cons,

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it is hard to arrive at a decision stating one is better than the other, but I think that the pleasure that

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provides slightly outweigh the pleasure from an individual event,

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I think

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is more beneficial

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individual

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.