Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football. But others think taking part in individual sports is better, like swimming. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Sports are broadly classified into athletics and games, out of which games are usually

team

events

and athletics are mainly individual

events

. Whether a person’s interest is towards

team

event or individual event is purely subjective,

however

, some people

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argue

that

team

games like football or cricket is more beneficial to take part in, compared to, individual

events

like swimming or wrestling.

On the other hand

, another group thinks that the latter is more beneficial than the former. Let us discuss deep into each of the

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arguments

before we arrive at a conclusion. Proponents of the

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argument

that

team

sport

is beneficial than

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sport

put forward the following points to substantiate their

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argument

. Taking part in a

team

sport

can improve a person’s soft skills like empathy and teamwork,

as a result

, improves his/her character.

For example

, in a

team

game

like football, players often care for their teammates since

that is

important for the

team

’s success.

Although

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are advantages, sometimes players get dragged into

team

politics which indeed stall their growth, and decreases their morale. To illustrate, take the example of Formula 1 which is one

such

sport

where teammates are the greatest rivals. People who believe

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game

is beneficial than

team

sport

lays down the following points.

Firstly

, individual

sport

provides a great sense of self-esteem,

therefore

great satisfaction during success.

For instance

, in

events

like swimming, all the effort is put in by the individual which gives him/her full ownership of success.

Secondly

, high physical effort is often required for an individual

sport

, which motivates the player to be fit.

In contrast

with

team

events

, individual sports requires

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amount of

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persistence

since there is no support from peers,

thus

there are chances that players might give up. In summary, whether

team

game

or individual

game

is more beneficial is a complicated topic for discussion. Both sides have their pros and cons,

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it is hard to arrive at a decision stating one is better than the other, but I think that the pleasure that

team

sport

provides slightly outweigh the pleasure from an individual event,

thus

I think

team

sport

is more beneficial

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individual

sport

.