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Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football. But others think taking part in individual sports is better, like swimming. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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In today's time, playing
sports
 has become a social event.
Alot
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A lot
 of us are meeting new people through sporting events and group lessons. But it can
also
 be a distraction from the sport itself and playing
solo
 would be the way to go. In
this
 essay, I am going to explore both views and suggest why taking part in
team
sports
 is beneficial. To start with, playing
team
sports
 like football, cricket has its own righteous benefits to humans in
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 of higher morale and
support
.
For instance
, a cricket player is always a part of a
team
 that helps him navigate through his fitness regime, injuries, emotional
support
 and
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social
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 setting.
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 more, the
team
 always keep each other motivated to keep pushing forward through mutual understanding and co-operation leading to
long lasting
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 friendships.
On the other hand
, playing
solo
sports
 like swimming
also
 reaps huge rewards to the extend of efforts put in
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 the
solo
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 member.
For example
,
a
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 individual who is
competeting
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competing
 in swimming competitions will be successful only if he performs better at a given time.
Also
, the
indiviual
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individual
 has to rely on himself for
support
 and motivation. He can be victorious by his
hardwoprk
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hard work
 and be known for it without giving anyone else a share in his triumph. In conclusion, playing
sports
in general
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 has its own benefit be it
solo
 or in a
team
.
Although
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 of people might think that playing
solo
 is beneficial. I
belevie
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believe
team
sports
 has added benefits that help us with more
support
 and boost
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 confidence.
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